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A forum for those artists who would like a more critical critique of their work, apposed to a "that's cool" and a smiley.

A Guide to Positive Critiques (adapted from PoetryPlease)

• Does not solely concentrate on a pieces weak points, but tempers constructive criticism with acknowledgment of the good features.
• Is not made up of comments like “well done” or emoticons, as they do not explain why the piece is well done. Comments and emoticons belong in the introduction and summary only.
• A knowledge of technical artistist terms is desirable, but not necessary, to be able to provide constructive criticism.
• Try to keep your thoughts focused on the piece and how it affects you as the viewer.
• Explain why you liked or disliked the piece; don’t just state the emotion it triggered.
• Describe which elements are good, and how they enhance the piece.
• Describe which elements of the piece need improving and politely offer alternatives that can improve the work.
• Please include an honest, but polite, summary in your critique.

Please remember that even if you do not like a custom, or it has numerous faults, keep your comments polite and positive. Always offer alternatives. To merely tear something down and not offer a better alternative is merely destruction.

By concentrating on the piece, and not the artist, we will help each other improve. By concentrating on form rather than content we not only help other artists, but ourselves as well, by learning where our own weaknesses may lie.



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 Post subject: First Munny
New postPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:50 am 

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I never really had anyone pilfer through my work, and tell what they thought. So, I'm going to post a photo of the first Munny I completed over two years ago. I'd really like to get a grasp on my artwork through another persons eyes.


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 Post subject: Re: First Munny
New postPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 8:49 am 
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I really love the black work on this piece it has a very sophisticated look to it but I think the red and blue eyes are out of place here and take away from the piece. As the eyes are a bit too big and cartoony for it compared to the rest of the body. I would do a smaller scale eye following the same pattern you have going with the black.

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 Post subject: Re: First Munny
New postPosted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:18 pm 

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Now that I think about it, and look at the piece... I agree with the statement about the eye. And thanks for your input on this piece.


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