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A Guide to Positive Critiques (adapted from PoetryPlease)

• Does not solely concentrate on a pieces weak points, but tempers constructive criticism with acknowledgment of the good features.
• Is not made up of comments like “well done” or emoticons, as they do not explain why the piece is well done. Comments and emoticons belong in the introduction and summary only.
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 Post subject: Robot Love - Part One (WIP)
New postPosted: Wed Feb 01, 2012 10:11 pm 
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I realize that the Rose Art blanks don't get a lot of respect among designer toy collectors/customizers, but when I first saw the twin pack with the block head & marshmallow head, I had an idea for them. The first idea didn't quite pan out. But then I had a second idea, started it and then it sat around for a while. So I recently picked it back up & started painting. So here's where I'm at...

((pics cut, more complete pics below))

As with my previous posts, critique is always welcome.

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 Post subject: Re: Robot Love - Part One (WIP)
New postPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 12:25 am 
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Arms look good so far. Will need to see more progress to critique some more.

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 Post subject: Re: Robot Love - Part One (WIP)
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I'm diggin it.

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 Post subject: Re: Robot Love - Part One (WIP)
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More progress. Still work to do. Face, obviously. Thinking about trying to freehand some lettering to look like stencils.

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Got a new phone. It seems to take better photos than my old camera.

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 Post subject: Re: Robot Love - Part One (WIP)
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Turned out awesome. Great colors

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 Post subject: Re: Robot Love - Part One (WIP)
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I sat down to work on the face for the yellow/Part One above and just wasn't feeling it.

Also wanted to work on Part Two, but also wasn't feeling it.

Back around Halloween I picked up one of the holiday themed blanks. At first I was thinking of doing a certain style of blue ghost, but with a sad cartoon smiley face. Last night (while I couldn't fall asleep) I thought about doing a pac ghost in a similar "old robot" style as above. I was going to put the arms on (still not done) but think I like it better without. But then that leaves me the problem of having to fill the holes after the body has been painted. :/

I couldn't get a decent pic with all the glare from the lights. They were all a bit out of focus, too. This is the best I could do for the moment.

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Now I want to make a pac-bot.

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